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【信件英文】大學開學必備!如何用英文寫信向教授詢問加簽二退、指導專題?內有範本!

【信件英文】大學開學必備!如何用英文寫信向教授詢問加簽二退、指導專題?內有範本!

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大學開學了!!對大學生來說,

開學季最重要事應該就是「加退選」和找「專題指導教授」了吧!

你會不會特別喜歡哪位外籍教授的課,

但不知道怎麼寫信詢問他們呢?

正確且有禮貌的詢問方式可以大大增加你成功的機率!

看完這篇文章,絕對能讓你有所收穫!


情境一:加簽

首先,信件的開頭介紹完自己後(姓名、科系),即可單刀直入說明你的目的。

因為教授通常都很忙,若是能讓他們越快了解你的目的,那加簽成功的機會就越大。

【實用句型】

1. I’m writing to inquire about the extra spots for your course (course name) (course number) which starts from the ___ to the  ____ period on (weekday).

我想要詢問您於(星期幾)第(__)節至第(__)節的課(課名)(課程代碼)有沒有開放加簽呢?

2. I was wondering if I could get an authorization code for your course (course name) (course number).

不知道是否能和您索取(課名)(課程代碼)的授權碼呢?

3. Unfortunately, I wasn’t lucky enough to get enrolled in your course (course name) in the first round of course selection.

因運氣不佳,我在第一階段選課時沒能選上您的(課名)。

當然,如果能展現你對於這門課的熱情,

或許也能感動教授,增加加簽成功的機率。

【實用句型】

1. I am highly passionate about (theme of the course).

我對於(課程主題)具有十分的熱忱。

2. I heard that your lectures on (theme of the course) are clear and detailed, which will definitely help me learn with better efficiency and effectiveness.

聽聞您於(課程主題)的講解非常清楚且詳細,定能助我高效學習,從中獲益良多。

3. I'm now taking a minor/double major in the Department of (major).

我現在也有輔修/雙主修(科系)。

情境二:二退

到了學期中,你或許會發現這門課跟你想像的不一樣,

或是你發現你跟不太上,這時與其被當,

在成績單上留下難看的紀錄,

大多數人會選擇二次退選(drop)。
【實用句型】

1. I'm writing to inform you of my decision to drop the course after mid-term.

我想告知您,我決定於期中後二退這門課。

2. It seems that I overestimated my time management ability, which I think will make it hard for me to have a satisfying performance in your course.

我的時間管理能力不如我想像的好,因此我在您的課上無法有令人滿意的表現。

3. I will still participate in every lecture and exam with maximum effort before mid-term.

在退選之前,我會盡到本分,在每堂課及每次考試付出最大的努力。

情境三:找專題指導教授

到了大三或大四,通常就要開始做專題或實習,

不論選擇哪一種,都要找一個指導教授,

而這時候要怎麼說服讓教授願意帶你就很重要了。

【實用句型】

1. I'm writing to ask if you are taking undergraduate students for the graduation project.

我想詢問您是否願意指導專題生?

2. I admire your research, achievement, and expertise in the field of (area).

您於(領域)的研究、成就及專業能力令我景仰。

3. Reading your paper “(title of the paper),” I found it matching my passion and values.

拜讀您的論文《(論文標題)》後,我認為您的研究和我所想的研究方向、理念相近。

4. Inspired by your work, I’m planning on researching/developing (topic of your project).

受您的研究啟發,我有意研究(專題題目)/開發(專題題目)。

5. Please let me know if you wish to discuss this in person.

如果您希望能當面詳談此事,請儘管告知我。

情境四:感謝教授的指導

最後專題順利完成,你也要畢業了,

感謝老師是必須的吧!

而且和教授保持聯繫以及好的關係也是擴增人脈的好方法喔~

【實用句型】

1. It is truly my honor to have you as my advisor.

能接受您的指導是我的榮幸。

2. It’s been a fruitful and meaningful year working with you.

和您共事的這一年非常充實,對我也意義非凡。

3. From the bottom of my heart, I appreciate all the support, advice, and care you gave me this year.

我打從心底感謝您這一年來對我的支持、指教以及關心。

直接寫給你看---參考範例

加簽信範例

Dear Professor Brooks,

My name is John Doe, and I’m a senior in the Department of Business Management (at National Tsing Hua University.)

I’m writing to inquire about the authorization code for your course Data Structures (CS02341), which starts from the second to the fourth period on Thursdays.

I am highly passionate about programming; thus, I’m now taking a double major in Computer Science.


I heard that your lectures on data structure are clear and detailed, which will definitely help me learn with better efficiency and effectiveness.

Thank you for the time you spent reading this letter.


Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
John Doe

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Brooks教授您好,

我是就讀於(國立清華大學)企業管理系三年級的John Doe。

我想詢問能否向您索取星期四第二至第四節「資料結構(CS02341)」的授權碼呢?

我對於程式設計具有高度熱忱,所以現在也有雙主修資訊工程。

聽聞您於資料結構的講解非常清楚且詳細,定能助我高效學習,使我從中獲益良多。

謝謝您百忙中撥冗閱讀此信,期待收到您的回覆。

John Doe 敬上

二退信範例

Dear Professor Brooks,

My name is John Doe (Student ID number: B10912345), who takes your course Data Structure (CS02341) (at National Tsing Hua University).

I'm writing to inform you of my decision to drop that course after mid-term.


It seems that I overestimated my time management ability, which I think will make it hard for me to have a satisfying performance in your course.

Hence, after much consideration, I believe it would be best for me to take this course when I am fully prepared.

I will still participate in every lecture and exam with maximum effort before mid-term.

Please let me know if you wish to discuss this in person.


Best regards,
John Doe

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Brooks教授您好,

我是修習您(開設於國立清華大學的)「資料結構(CS02341)」課程的John Doe (學號是 B10912345)。

此信為告知您我於期中後二退此門課的決定。

我的時間管理能力不如我想像的純熟,因此我在您的課上無法有令人滿意的表現。

經過多重考慮之下,我認為等我完全準備好後再修這門課才是最好的辦法。

在退選之前,我會盡到本分,在每堂課及每次考試付出最大的努力。

若您希望當面詳談此事,請儘管告知,謝謝。

John Doe 敬上

找專題指導教授信範例

Dear Professor Brooks,

My name is John Doe, and I am a senior majoring in Computer Science at National Tsing Hua University.

I'm writing to ask if you are taking undergraduate students for the graduation project.


I am highly passionate about programming, and I admire your research, achievement, and expertise in the field of it.

I’m starting the graduate project in the second semester of senior year.

Inspired by your work, I’m planning on developing a facial recognition program, and I reckon you’d be the best fit for it.

If you wish to discuss this in person, please let me know.


Thank you for reading this letter, and I hope to hear from you soon.


Best regards,
John Doe

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Brooks 教授您好,

我是就讀於(國立清華大學)資訊工程系三年級的 John Doe。

我想詢問您是否願意指導大三專題生?

我對於程式設計有高度熱忱,而您在此領域的研究、成就以及專業能力皆令我景仰。

我將於大三下開始進行製作專題。受到您的研究啟發,我想要開發一套臉部辨識的程式,

且我認為您是最適合此領域研究的指導教授。

若您希望當面詳談此事,請儘管告知。

感謝您撥冗閱讀此信。期盼收到您的回信。

John Doe 敬上

感謝信範例

Dear Professor Brooks,

It is truly my honor to have you as my advisor.


It’s been a fruitful and meaningful year working with you. From the bottom of my heart, I appreciate all the support, advice, and care you gave me.


I am truly proud of what we have accomplished, which I couldn’t have done without you.


Looking forward to every opportunity to work with you again in the future, and I hope we keep in touch after graduation.

Yours truly,
John Doe

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Brooks 教授您好,

能接受您的指導是我的榮幸。

和您共事的這一年非常充實,對我也意義非凡。

我打從心底對於這一年您對我的支持、指教以及關心感激涕零。

我們的研究成果也讓我感到很驕傲,

若沒有您的指導,我也無法有此等成就。

盼望未來還有機會能與您合作,

也希望在我畢業後能繼續和教授保持聯繫。

John Doe 敬上

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注意事項:

大學名稱視情況可寫可不寫。

若你要找的教授在別的學校有開課,那還是寫出來,

確保他知道你是哪間學校的喔!

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以上就是開學時會用到的英文書信大全啦!

開學後不妨試試看,

相信你可以達成目標的!